Tuesday, March 25, 2008

When no one could listen

I once woke up with a rough throat. I had no idea why. I was in 5th grade, so I hadn't exactly been partying the previous night. I went through my morning routine, oblivious to my impending fate, complaining unconditionally to my mother and trying to get out of school. But as I stepped out the door, something happened. I turned to Ari, a 3rd grader I walked to school with, to comment on the weather and such--it was a cold, March morning--and suddenly found that I could not talk. I was mute.
It was odd. My throat didn't even hurt. I would just try to form words and nothing would come out. It was actually a quite interesting experience. I looked around and saw the world in a new light. The budding trees seemed more intricate, each twig magnified by my new perspective. I could hear the wind at several different levels, like a symphony that twisted through the air, an unstoppable force. Even the sun, harsh and unforgiving moments before, was suddenly a bright orb that drew my curiosity, a beacon of hope in the grey sky.
And then I tried to speak, silently repeating several curse words I had recently learned. The taboo broke and my voice cut through the air once more. "Holy F*ck!"
Ari turned to me.

8 comments:

nahoma said...

Daniel,

This is an...um...interesting story. It is quite "intriguing." I can't wait to read more...

Molly said...
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nahoma said...

it's really deep...

Molly said...

Sorry, I spelled something wrong on the original post. No really, the word something was spelled wrong. Anyways, it was good, though not neccesarily what the student teacher had in mind, I think. Have you ever thought about writing something serious?

Molly said...

Daniel, I hate you. I can't believe I even commented nicely on your blog. You are the worst person on the planet. So what if I couldn't think of a good title? Don't have to be mean about it! There, now I'm done. See if I ever comment on your blog again!

danhop said...

I couldn't think of anything to please the teachers...when in doubt, make a crap joke and run in the opposite direction.
Seriously, though, I've found that people, even when they don't think I have at all any reason to be jumping into a topic, are polite about it--and I'm too loud not to be heard.

poetryman said...

well, i do like it but...how about actually writing a poem about change this time if you know what i mean.

poetryman said...

well, i do like it but...how about actually writing a poem about change this time if you know what i mean.